A numerous amount of mistakes
First off, your spelling sucks. Amazing how many people can't spell worth shit.
Your recording lapsed off at the end of the movie, so it lost it's consistency.
Your graphics and animation were allright, but the music and animation was not in sync, the animation fell behind the music.
You've got a ways to go. Plus you need to compress this. Badly. 3.8 megs of this could of been shrunk to under 1000k.